Illustration by Nick Slater on dribbble . For this week's reading task, I edited my paragraphs according to the feedback given to me. This included providing an example of a game that uses the three act structure storytelling method. I also fixed my introduction because it sounded more like a conclusion. I read through my paragraphs and made small changes such as replacing words. I added three images of graphs to provide a visual reference to what I had written. I also created a title image for my writing and an image for Nonlinear substructures (see below). I wrote a brief author bio and rearranged my bibliography into alphabetical order. Title image created on illustrator: linear + non-linear stories in games (original photo from unsplash ) Image made with Illustrator.