Illustration from Interface Illustration: Productive Work on dribbble . There were not many changes that I needed to make when I received feedback from my peers. The feedback was generally positive and I was told that my paragraphs are straightforward and stay relevant to the point. I also reworded the highlighted sentences below as suggested. In the first and second paragraphs, I mentioned that linear narratives have a defined beginning, middle and end. My classmate pointed out that it was unnecessary to repeat myself so I edited one of the sentences. I initially had numbers beside the quotes that correspond to the references list at the bottom but changed it and placed the author's name and year of publication in brackets instead. Paragraphs with feedback applied: Difference between a linear and nonlinear story structure The most common storytelling structures that are present in games are linear and nonlinear, since there is no single mode of narrativity in enterta...